Thursday, March 29, 2012

practice fimal 2 On Hair

When I think about my hair I think about how I should be bald. I have been doing things to my hair since I was about thirteen years old. I think it is just hair and it will grow back some time. I have been really lucky with my hair it always comes back just as nice. My hair has been straight and put together and not to crazy and out of control. My hair is healthy looking and not all dry and unhealthy. I feel really lucky in this way.

When I was a kid my sisters friend would always do our hair. I would be up for anything we would shave the back of it. Color the sides green or pink what ever color we had. She would curl it and would burn me about ever time. I would still let her do my hair, I'm not sure way I keep letting her do it after the first burn, I should of learned. We had fun and I could fit in with the big kids and was one of them for a while. I also liked getting my hair done, and having someone do it for me. I should of know than I was going to be high needs with my hair.

It is funny to think about those days as we were kids just playing around. Now she owns Renee's Hair Design. She stills does my hair after all this time. I have really good luck with her to because she knows me and what I like, so I just tell to do what she wants to do to my hair. It always looks good I think. She keeps my up with my hair like tells me when I should come in to get it highlighted again or cut. She also will make time to do my hair even if it is after hours.

We have done everything to my hair from straighten, perming, coloring, highlighting, cut it. I really like to straighten my hair and it straightens very easy. Ever now and than I like to change it up and do a perm I also like all the curls. I have been real lucky with the perms no bad ones yet, but I do the big curls not the small curls. I think the big curls look good with my hair. I have not colored it for a long time, but I still highlight it a lot. I go about every three or four months and redo my highlights. I also grow my hair out and when I'm tired of long hair I will have her cut it very short. I like to change my hair up with cutting it short or having it long. I think sometimes they are to hard to keep up with my hair the highlights and cutting it. Than I thank My friend who does all that for my thank god for her. She make my hair look good for me at all times.

I know how lucky I am to have her do all that for me. I really like going and getting my hair done with her. I like the new look she gives me every time. I just went over the weekend to get my hair done and we cut it really short, and highlighted it again, I was there all morning from about nine to one, so it takes a long time to do my hair. I really like to changing my hair look when ever I can. It is nice to have the same person doing my hair after all the years, even when we were kids.


1 comment:

  1. "I have been doing things to my hair since I was about thirteen years old."

    This is the key sentence, what you have to give examples of. Grafs 2 & 4 work, but graf 3 is not an example of what you do to your hair but a transition graf between childhood an d now. So, it all works except graf 3 which has to offer another example of stuff you do to your hair.

    Try a rewrite.

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