I have just read a article on a little girl who had been sick for the last four years. The name stuck with me and the picture of her stuck with me also, but I could not figure out who she was. The poor little girl had Lyme disease and no doctor could figure it out. She ended up going to Connecticut to a doctor and he finally found out that she had Lyme disease. I was telling my parents and my sister about the story and my sister told me that it was sally who my niece showed and took care of there goats with. I felt so bad for her, because she is a very good kid and was always happy. She is know helping organize a community "Tick Talk" and she is the one talking to schools things like that. I think it is a great thing what she is doing.
When I first looked it up I used my Yahoo Search and came up with a bunch of different things and two that had her story. The first one I looked at was from the Bangor Daily New and the head line was "A Brewer girl hopes her battler with Lyme disease can help." This had a lot of info about the story and how many doctors she went to and than about the one who figured it out for her. I did not have a lot about her "Tick Talk" that she is putting together for other people, so they don't have to go throw what she went through. I will go back to the Bangor Daily New to see and read articles.
I also looked at "BDN Blogs Maine Out There" The head line was "Brewer girl Lyme disease story powerful" I did not think there was a lot of detail about her story like the parts about being sick and how bad she got with the disease. It did have a lot about her "Tick Talk" and were she was having them and when. It got right to the point and was o.k I would go back to look at articles.
The bibliography will have to have standard bibliographic entries, different style for newspapers vs web vs blogs vs etc. There is material on that on my website under the assignment. Your notes are very good--full, informative, interesting.
ReplyDeleteI looked at the notes, but not 100% sure what you want me change. Like do the differences on a news paper or the web or blogs and how there set up are different from each other.
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