My child keeps me busy with the doctors office, we are going all the time. Ever since Addie was 4 months old we were at the doctors and ER about once a week, some weeks it would be two times in a week. She gets ear infections and pink eye had whooping cough. I can't remember how many time she has had a ear infections and how many times she had pink eye. She had the whooping cough two different times. Now that she is 10 moths old she is sick again. She has been pulling at her ears and not sleeping and crying a lot. She has a bad cough to on top of all that. I have looked in her mouth and it looks like her two top teeth are coming in. I thought do I bring her back to the doctors or do I just call it teething.
She had just had a ear infection last week, I was thinking it did not go a way. When she had the ear infection last week it was the same thing. Like not sleeping, crying a lot, pulling at her ears. It was not getting any better so I called the doctors. Her ear were clear so it must be teething than. That made me happy that her ears were clear. I wish I new if she was teething or not instead of going to the doctors ever time. I feel like if I don't bring her to the doctors, like when I think she is teething it will be a ear infection and it will get really bad and hurt her hearing. It is very hard you never know what to do with them.
As mad as they gets, I still love them no matter what. Even if we have not slept all night all they have to do is smile and all that goes away like it never happen. It is so hard when they can't tell you what is wrong and they just get mad because you don't know whats wrong with them. I think they are only a baby once too, so I try to take ever moment with them good or bad. I also hope soon she will grow out of the ear infections. Her teeth will coming in soon to and we will not have to do it again. We will be able to sleep again maybe even through the night.
I think I'd paragraph it differently. Your intro graf ought to be this:
ReplyDelete"My child keeps me busy with the doctors office, we are going all the time. Ever since Addie was 4 months old we were at the doctors and ER about once a week, some weeks it would be two times in a week."
Then what's left is the middle graf with your current last graf wrapping it up. Not asking for a rewrite, just saying if it's paragraphed differently, all the sickness detail are tied together.