Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Redone Cause essay 1


The Redone Cause essay 1

Ear infections are no fun. The ear infections normally start out with the conman head cold. Like runny

thick green nose or even watering eye, your ears can also drain a very smelly wax. You will also notices

your child is not sleeping and just crying. They will also pull at there ears a lot or be poking there

finger in the ear or put anything that will fit in there ears. All those are the big sings of a ear infection.



The doctors say my girls get them so much is because there ears are not fully formed yet. There ears

don't drain the right way. You get fluid that builds up in your ear drum and it just sits there. If you get a

head cold it gets that fluid infected. Thats when it turns into a ear infection and they hurt and are just no

fun at all. If you get one ear infection it is more conman to keep getting them in till you grow out of

them or get tubs.


I know when my girls just have a conman head cold it tuns into a ear infections. It starts out like any

other head cold just a runny nose and nothing more. Than over night or even in a hour it turns into a ear

infection. Than the hole thing changes in that time and they get a very high temp and just cry and don't

stop crying. You try to get them right into the doctors to get them on some antibiotics as soon as you

can. Than hope the antibiotics work and clear it right up, so the kids are not in pain anymore, and they

stop crying.


When I see my girls starting to get a head cold I start think about all this. I watch them very close to see

if there is any changes. If there is any change I call the doctors and get them right in. I like to be on top

of my kids health and try to stop the ear infections before they get very bad. If you let the ear infections

go it can damage there hearing. Also if you have ever had a ear infections you know how bad they hurt.

I don't like it when me kids are in pain and just cry.

1 comment:

  1. I don't see three clear and separate reasons for ear infection here: unformed ears, head colds, and--?

    It really looks like a four graf essay (hard to tell) and that the the third-reason graf is missing.

    So, this still needs rewrite.

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