Holyke John, B,D,N staff
A Brewer Girl hopes her battle with Lyme disease can help
The Bangor Daily News
Bangor Maine
3/16/12
In the Outdoors Section
I think the paper is correct most of the time with the stories. It is very helpful to be able to know what is going on around you. I like the set up of the paper online or just the paper that you can get in the mail.
This was what the article was about a little girl who had been sick for the
last four years. The name stuck with me and the picture of her stuck
with me also, but I could not figure out who she was. The poor little
girl had Lyme disease and no doctor could figure it out. She ended up
going to Connecticut to a doctor and he finally found out that she had
Lyme disease. I was telling my parents and my sister about the story and
my sister told me that it was sally who my niece showed and took care
of there goats with. I felt so bad for her, because she is a very good
kid and was always happy. She is know helping organize a community "Tick
Talk" and she is the one talking to schools things like that. I think
it is a great thing what she is doing.
The notes ought to be a little shorter, but that's not really a problem. The format of the entry is still wrong, but maybe at this point you should be putting your energy into other things. In the overall grading of the isearch the bibliographical format is not a big part.
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