Graf 2

My Brainstorming .Doing my schooling for a better job. .My kids and big family. .How hard it is for a child to lose a family pet. .Getting a car for the family/ in the budget. .My daily routine. I will say I'm a thinker. I have to think about what I say and how I say it. To make sure I word it the right way I want it to sound. I also Don't mind criticism, I feel that is the only way you know if your not doing something right or not. I think it is a good learning tool, and to get other peoples point of views. For me it is very hard to just right things down with out thinking about them. I agree with the details are very important to keep the reader into what there are reading. The details really put a picture in your mind to help you think you are there in their shoes. I'm also like how John is very open minded and seems to be very free with different ways of doing things.